tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3308028589519119466.post2919717232645498311..comments2023-05-12T02:41:34.843-07:00Comments on Fabulous in 5B: 100 Word Challenge: EmmaCara Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12762056655419829678noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3308028589519119466.post-73430970067557850362014-05-04T02:44:18.781-07:002014-05-04T02:44:18.781-07:00Hi Emma,
You have written this so well. I always ...Hi Emma,<br /><br />You have written this so well. I always find writing in the present tense is very difficult but you have done it perfectly. What works really well is the way we never find out what is in the cupboard, or even what it is you are looking for! This hooks the reader in as they would want to know - just like I do.<br /><br />What were you looking for?? Or is it a secret never to be told!<br /><br />Great writing.<br /><br />Mr Connor<br />Team 100wc<br />Derby, UKMr Connor - Team 100wchttp://2013year5.stjosephsblogs.netnoreply@blogger.com