“Here is your test class, I hope you take your time. Make sure to double check your test.”
I sharpened my pencil, and took my seat. I knew I would ace this test. I felt it in my bones. Mrs.Mackery passed out the test. Problem One: What is the capital of China? Easy, wait Beijing. Next problem, what is a giddididlyooper? What, that isn’t a word. I looked through the test, and the questions were all gibberish. What kind of test is this. Then the bell rings.
“Okay class turn in your tests, times up.”
The bell rang. It was late, but I thought I had enough time.
Star- Very entertaining story
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Hi Sofia, I like the way you use the theme of a test for your story. Tests are all about time, so it was an excellent choice. You make the story interesting by introducing the gibberish questions which lead to confusion and running out of time. Brilliantly done!
ReplyDeleteUsing the first person singular made your story very immediate so the reader experiences the same thing as the reader as they happen. In this instance, it works very well and you manage to pull off this difficult style.
Well done!
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