Bill walks up to the bee. “Carfel now” Joe says walking up behind Bill. Bill reaches for the bee. He gently touches the bee’s leg and Joe starts to open his brief-case. “Do you think we’ll need it?” Joe asks Bill.
“Quickly” Bill replies. Joe starts to work on the bee. “Come on!” Bill urges. “There almost to us.” They hear footsteps in the distance. Joe shushes him and turns his attention to the bee again. The footsteps get louder. “Got it” says Joe and stuffs the bee leg in the case. The hear voices where they are. They leave.
I really like how you used diolague and how you went into detail.
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