Space Poem of Awesomeness
By Sofi
This is my space poem. This poem is special to me because I worked really hard on it. I also think that it’s one of my better poems. I enjoy this type of poem because I think they are fun to read and also write. Here it is!
Ooblech goes to Jupiter
My name is Ooblech.
I traveled in my asnomobile,
I am strongest on my planet,
Planet Pilget.
I crashed into Jupiter,
and got out of my asnomobile.
Oh no, I'm getting smushed!
Will I die?
Will I get smushed and just splat?!
Oh no! Must...Get...To...asno...mobile!
I crawled along Jupiter to where I crashed.
I could feel the air Getting pushed out of me!
Then, I couldn't even open my eyes!
Suddenly, I could feel the side of my asnomobile!
I'll live!
I sat in my seat and closed the top.
I could breath and open my eyes!
I'd learned my lesson and I never went to Jupiter again!
I chose this because I worked really hard and put lots of effort into it. This is a good poem.
I love the poem sofi! I like it cause its you. why did you write this poem?
ReplyDeleteYou add a lot of questions in the poem which makes it a good one. What ifs are always a good question starter.
ReplyDeletePiglet love it��
ReplyDeleteThank you all. And Jimmy, I wrote the poem because I love to be silly, and sillyness inspired me to write this. Thanks for asking.
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