100 word challenge: Devon

The Last Straw

She just wouldn't stop crying.the blood was running down her face, the man was still hitting

her with the baseball bat. The tears and blood mixed on her face looking like Hawaiian punch

you could drink off her.She looked at the man,

who when she did, hit her again....but this one was a critical hit.She slumped onto the floor,

screaming,crying,dying.The bat was now dyed red with blood,the spitting image of her face.by the time he swung the bat to swing again,she wasn't breathing,her body stayed still on the ground.

by the time he realized he killed her,she was dead.