Tuesday, November 3, 2015

100 Word Challenge: Claudia

The Skeleton by Claudia

I stumbled backwards into a sharp gravestone as the creepy skeleton crawled further out of the ground. It stood up, brushed itself off, and walked gingerly towards me. I screamed and ran. It followed me wherever I went. I faked it out, swerving left and right and eventually out of the graveyard. It still followed me. I sprinted towards my house. I quickly unlocked the door and scrambled inside. It still followed me. I went into my room, locked the doors and climbed into my cozy bed. It busted through the door ready to attack: and then I woke up.

2 comments:

  1. I like how you built suspense and then twisted it at the end and made it a dream.

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  2. Wow I like how you made the skeleton able to bust locked door!

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