I felt so sick on this plane. I felt like I would throw up. Then I looked out the plane window to see a u.f.o. I screamed at the top of my lungs. "I knew it!", I shouted. "There is a u.f.o out there. Aliens are going to take over the world!" I had watched hundreds of alien TV shows in my life and I knew that there were aliens in there. But I soon realized I was wrong. A door opened to the u.f.o. Inside were pigs. The pigs had wings on them. They stepped out and flew.
I really liked the twist you included Jonah, where it was pigs inside the UFO and not aliens! I did not see that coming at all! I can imagine how scared and sick someone would feel seeing a UFO beside their plane window, and you introduced that well.
ReplyDeleteNicola Richardson, Team 100wc, Tyne and Wear, UK