I was working outside. I was shoveling the neighbors driveway that was covered with snow. Suddenly out of nowhere a giant mutated green horse started running straight toward me. I had never heard of such a thing. It couldn't be real. Monsters were not real. Monster horses were not real either. But it wasn't my imagination. It was also a giant horse. It was at least 200 feet tall. It was more like 250 feet tall. Quickly, I carefully got in the nearby sewer pipe and swam away. It was disgusting. Once I was out of the sewer I ran home screaming like a girl.
Nice job Jonah. I like how you said a mutated horse. I also liked how you exaggerated and said that the horse was 200 feet tall then 250 feet tall.
ReplyDeleteHello Jonah and thanks for entering the 100 WC this week! I enjoyed reading your story. It had a good beginning, middle and end and I like how you were the one who swam away, rather than the horse. Your storytelling made it easy for me to picture the scene in my mind, which always makes a story more interesting. Well done and keep writing!
ReplyDeleteMrs Davis, Team 100, Cambridgeshire, UK