Monday, May 12, 2014

100 Word Challenge: Ethan

Today a giant bee flew into town, destroying 90% of the citizens. Little people, with big shoes, meanwhile big people with little shoes, had a little bee which destroyed 90% of town. It was a nightmare. Shoes went flying. Men and women were crying. It was dreadful. Then, an army of grasshoppers, came to hold off the bees. They fought well, until the bees figured out that if they sting them it kills themselves, as well as the enemy. Then mosquito mercenaries began to insert their tradozones into anyone who wasn't paying them. It was downright, a battle of the bugs.

1 comment:

  1. Hello Ethan, I am a pupil from Our Ladys Primary school in England. Firstly,i would like to say i really enjoyed reading your story, you had a good use of vocabulary, and very descriptive in your words. You were very imaginative, and the story had lots of twists and turns. A GREAT ending Ethan!!

    Well done...From Livia