Thursday, May 8, 2014

100 Word Challenge: Sam

As we examine the beastly creature, we think about ourselves, we think we are so smart and powerful in this world. But, look at what is in front of us. A giant with black and yellow stripes. Its wings sparkle in the sunlight. It has a very sharp razor point at it ends we think for hunting. We touch it and it is gushy, like jello. We touch it again and it starts turning over. Then like a bullet coming out of a gun, it's eyes bolt up. It flies away with fear. Are we a monster or a prey.

1 comment:

  1. Hello Sam,

    I loved this. Your turn of phrase is wonderful. You have used some great vocabulary too.

    Your opening sentence really grips the reader's attention.

    Keep writing.

    Ms R. Orr
    Head Teacher