Sunday, March 30, 2014

Writing: A Typical Mystery, Part 10

A Typical Mystery:Part 10 by Manny 

“Anna!” Elsa said excitedly, still awkwardly crying. Next came Rapunzel with,”Flynn! How did you get here?” she asked. Happy suddenly knew why they were so happy. Well, first and foremost, we were all saved. And second, Princess Anna was Elsa’s sister, and Flynn was Rapunzel’s husband.
Happy was still crying. Just because we’re saved, doesn’t mean you have to forget about Brad’s death, Happy thought. He soon became disgusted. “Brad was my best friend!! And for you guys to, like, forget he’s gone forever is heartbreaking! I know this may sound stupid, but you still need to remember that he’s gone and grieve over it!!” After that, everyone looked at him, and Elsa began to cry as she hugged Anna. “Wait, who died?” Anna asked. She obviously didn’t know what had happened. Happy soon realized why Elsa was crying. All because she killed Brad. Happy also realized he shouldn’t have said what he had said.
“You know, WE NEED TO LEAVE!! Enough with all the crying!! It all. Doesn’t. MATTER!!” Cinderella shouted.
Elsa felt her whole body shake. “You know, Cinderella, you need to shut up!”, she sobbed between words,”because Brad was the best friend also that I have ever had. I loved him because he was so nice and caring. And even though I killed him, I feel the same pain that Goldilocks, Rapunzel, AND Happy feel. You know who doesn’t matter, YOU! So shut up and speak when you know what you’re talking about!” Cinderella pouted with a frowny face on and said,”You know what, it’s time I leave.” Elsa nodded her head.
“Yeah! It’s about time.” Cinderella left and fled. Well soon, they all decided to leave after explaining Brad’s death.
After they all were out the house and running, well, HAPPY scurrying, down to the house, they all breathed heavily. Elsa stopped running and fell to the ground crying. She soon said,”Wait, we need to bring Brad’s body!” Elsa was desperate, and she would be even more heartbroken if the crew didn’t. “I’m afraid it’s too late. Is that okay?” Anna asked.
“Sure.” Elsa seemed fine with it. Finally, it was time to go back to the house, they were gonna get that Golden Apple. No matter how hard it would be to go on without Brad, they needed to keep going. And Elsa was ready for some buttkicking, some face-slapping, and some revenge on the Acne’s.

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