This wasn't what Cassalyn wanted for her 13th birthday. A globe
whizzed by, followed by a fork. She saw the knife coming toward her
head.Cassalyn ducked; she didn't want to get killed by a utensil. She
heard the front door open. Mom came in, her eyes wide. She started
dialing a few numbers on the phone.
The door busted open, by people in heavy, white suits. All
of them ran out of the room. A week later, it happened again.
Meetings were held across the country to find an answer.
Poltergeists are teens that have emotions built into a vibration that
causes things to move. Cassalyn is one of them.
Hello Diniti, what an unusual story, with a good twist at the end. I wonder if the events were triggered by her 13th birthday. Well done. Next time try using more adjectives to describe feelings.
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Hi Mrs. Fairburn! Poltergeists are usually teenage girls, don't know why, but it can effect others. I had so many adjectives before, but I had 188 words. I had deleted most of the adjectives to make it reach the goal.
ReplyDeleteYes, it was very unusual story. But in a good way. Hey, it's Manny here. I really like how your writing draws me in. It's really cool. I'm glad I was able to read this 100WC!!
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