100 Word Challenge by Daboh
One day, Maria walked into her backyard when she saw a light. She crept up it as it got brighter. Suddenly, she was blown off her feet. When she woke up it was morning. “ What is going on?”, she wondered. Later she went outside again and found a book on the grass. In it was everything she needed to know. Two spirits had been arguing for a long time. They were in her backyard when they saw her coming. They decided that they would rather get along than explain everything to her in the one language that she understood. She gave a sigh of relief.
This is a very good piece of writing because it leaves me as a reader with lots to imagine - I like it when I have to think for myself about the language they might use and the argument they were having.
ReplyDeleteThere is enough information to tell the story clearly but because you haven't used too much description it has allowed you to get more of the story into the 100 words. Well done.
Mr Hearn Team 100 WC