Friday, February 21, 2014

100 Word Challenge: Quinn

The People are being possessed and walking to the Zombie Master in his Zombie Base with Zombie Powers stored on the Zombie Shelves. The People can not control their bodies when they are possessed. The Zombie Master is laughing his evil laugh. The People will turn into Zombies in his secret lair. The Zombie Master will use his Zombie Powers to turn the People into Zombies. The People are actually 5B! They are floating at 5 mph. When they turn into Zombies they will go out and infect all the other people in the world and cause a Zombie Invasion!
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  1. AnonymousFebruary 22, 2014 at 12:28 AM

    From: Steph Hope (Team100WC)
    Oh no, a zombie invasion!

    Although you have used the word "zombie" rather a lot in this 100WC, I think the repetition actually works well and suits the style of the piece. I like the little twist you add - where the reader finds out that the possessed people are your class…

    Thanks for posting!

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 23, 2014 at 5:02 AM

    Hello Cara!

    This is a scary story! I like the descriptions you included such as 'evil laugh' and 'secret lair'.

    I would have liked this even more if you had made it more gory! Maybe you'll do that in another story!

    Keep up the good work! :)

    Mrs Radd (Team100WC) Northamptonshire, England.

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