Friday, February 7, 2014

100 Word Challenge: Sarah

I feel myself flying through the air, wait I'm just falling. I was pushed off a boat. That wasn't very nice. People liked to judge me. I could do things they couldn't. Like talk to my friend Becky. I can also fly! Wait, nope, for some reason I couldn't fly. I feel my body slam against the water. Were drowning. Where's the boat? We look all around for it but all we could see was water and plants. It was Becky and I, alone. I feel my chest start to burn, and I look around for Becky and there she is grinning. My eyelids slowly drop.

1 comment:

  1. Sarah,
    It's Emma. That was a suspenseful story. Why do people judge her? Who's becky? Why didn't she help the girl? You could write a follow up story and explain everything!

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