"George, I'm so bored, can't we just go ride our bikes or something. I hate being grounded," Brendan said annoyed.
"Whatever, just hang up because I'm tired, your taking up time from my beauty sleep." Right then he hung up. Soon after George hung up Brendan started to drift off too. Soon enough, Brendan was dreaming about very fluffy unicorns.
"Oh hello Mr.Fluffy Unicorn, what can I do for you today?" Brendan was saying in his very deep sleep.
"Brendan, what are you doing? Mr.Fluffy Unicorn is waiting for you." That's when Brendan realized, it was all real.
Hello Sarah,
ReplyDeleteCan I firstly apologise for being so late in visiting your brilliant entry from last week.
What a curious dream - or reality in the case; a fluffy unicorn waiting for Brendan. I wonder what happened after Brendan realised that it was all real. Your speech at the beginning is accurately punctuated, but could you have started with Brendan staring to nod off to sleep and then explain what happened next, rather than before? Just a thought.
Keep up the great work and entering the 100wc.
Mrs W- Team 100wc
Flamborough, East Yorkshire, England