Thursday, February 6, 2014

Writing: A Typical Fantasy, Part 3

A Typical Fantasy:Part 3 by Manny 

    Let's start off where we left off. We met this guy, right, and he gave us shelter. As it got dark, he led us in this hut, and me and Happy had a great sleep.
    The wind was still cold, blowing with a chill, as we got out and went out to keep on going with the journey. It was weird, because we did not know what the man’s name was. So I piped up and asked him. “Um...what’s your name?” I finally asked. He gave a long answer.
    “People call me Rocket, because my body’s like a jetpack. I can soar through the sky with fire and gas coming out of my back. But one time, I got hurt when I was doing it. So my mom, who’s a wizard, removed it.” Wow, I thought. That’s pretty cool, I kept thinking. I wonder if Happy should ask him a question, just so we know more about this guy. Without me asking, Happy did. He said,”Do you live in the forest?”
    “Yes, I do. I am actually trying to go there.” Me and Happy looked at each other with fascination. We have someone who knows where we’re going!
    As we kept walking through the cold, I saw Rocket take a turn. So, Happy and I took a turn too. The wind was cold, and all I could see was just piles of snow. We kept walking until we reached another hut. We should stay here, I thought. Just to be warm. It turns out, the hut was an abandoned house. As we walked in, Rocket said, “Wait. I need to go and get something.”
    “Where are you going?” Happy asked.
    “To leave you guys here. Too bad, that little stupid squirrel and you, the tall skinny kid could not figure out if trusting a stranger was a good idea. And it turns out, it was not! I’m leaving you guys here to head back to my own place. I’m going to take over the WHOLE ENTIRE FOREST!!” Happy and I looked at each other as Rocket left.
    Happy screamed,”Oh no. We’re doomed!”

1 comment:

  1. OMG MANNY!
    That was so scary! I wonder what Happy and Jason would do and if they will try to find a way out and find Rocket and stop him from taking over the world!
    THIS IS GOING TO BE SO SCARY!!!

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