Friday, March 6, 2015

100 Word Challenge: Anette

When I looked out the plane window, I saw the clouds swirling in weird shapes. I looked at my soggy sandwich and wilted salad, and sighed. This plane trip had been horrible so far. The attendant had spilled the sprite I had ordered all over me, so now I look like I had an "Accident". You can practically SEE the baby in the next aisle mocking me. I really can't wait until we land. The place we are going THIS time better be worth it. My dad let out a small snore. The clouds continued swirling just outside the window.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Anette,
    Thank you for entering this week's 100 Word Challenge.
    I enjoyed reading your story. It made me laugh. Things don't seem to be going your way! Your story was full of little details and descriptions making it easy for me to visualise exactly what you were going through.I liked the way you started and finished your story with the swirling clouds. Well done!

    Keep up the great work!
    I look forward to reading more adventures from you.

    Mrs Boyce @ Team 100 WC
    Cork, Ireland
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