One day I was walking and not watching where I was going and fell into an open sewer pipe. There was murky green water inside. Carefully, I swam to find an open exit because the one that I fell in through got closed. So while swimming to find an exit I moaned and groaned and wished that I had watched where I was going while I was walking.I didn't want to be in this disgusting place. It had bugs and disease just waiting around the corner. Suddenly, a horse came galloping down the tunnel like a skater across ice. Then I realized I was dreaming.
Neha,
ReplyDeleteI like how you had the ending as waking up. Did you realize that you changed the setting of you story in the middle of it? Your story doesn't really have a lot of problems and solutions in it. Possibly, that could make your story more interesting.