Personification Poetry

Personification Poem

I wrote a personification poem about the sun.  I think this poem is special because we need the sun to survive.  I enjoy it because the picture are funny and I like the part when I explained what the sun and planets do together.

The Sun Poem

                    By Jean

    I am the Sun.  

I work all day and all night.  

I start to sweat from working. 

I work with all the other planets.  

I know one day I am going to blow up.  

Literally BLOW UP!

    I work with Mercury, Venus, Earth, Mars, Jupiter, Saturn, Neptune and Uranus, 

unless you count Pluto because he is a dwarf planet.

    We have the weirdest job.  We basically play Ring Around the Rosy.  

Does not sound very fun right especially when you do it everyday and night.

    I selected this poem because I thought it was one of my best poems.  The part i liked best was when the sun was was so tired  that he would blow up.  I am proud of it because  I really tried to make it the best it

can be.