100 Word Challenge
#2 On the same Prompt
By:Abigail
I was just walking home from school one day and I fell into a pot hole. I was screaming my head off. I still had not hit the ground yet. It must be a portal I thought. Was I pushing through the earth of was I falling into a deep hole? Would I ever get out? Would anyone notice that I was gone? There were so many things that I wanted to know. I wanted answers fast. I stared to cry as I was still falling. Was I really falling? What was I supposed to do? I was so scared. Then it hit me.
Hello Abigail, what an interesting story. You ask all sorts of existential questions as you fall! People ask those questions throughout their lives, although they are not falling through a hole, or space.
ReplyDeleteI love the question "Was I really falling?" Indeed, how would you know without physical references?
This is a lovely, thoughtful, even philosophical piece of writing. Well done!
Sarah, Team 100WC
Montpellier, France
Hi this is Abby. I really like that question too. It just gives you that exciting feeling. Thanks for reading my piece!
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