Monday, February 24, 2014
100 Word Challenge: Shane
As the crowd roars everyone else starts to calm them down."Please be quiet everyone!" said the group leader."We shall keep mining and somehow find gold or silver. The more we mine, the sooner they let us go and get paid. "Got that!" The crowd gets louder and louder in agreement and starts mining. As they are pushing through the earth all the miners get into an argument. Whichever miner gets the most gold or silver gets all the gold and silver. All the miners get back to work and works faster. At the end of the day no one had won.
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Your story was very interesting and I wanted to keep on reading. Great Job!
ReplyDeleteThat's a great way to open your story Shane - 'As the crowd roars...' really gets readers wondering what might be coming next. Mining for precious metals is a really unusual theme to pick for the prompt too, especially as there sees to be a rather interesting back story, where the miners might actually have been captives of some sort? You've really stirred up my imagination.
ReplyDeleteWell done and keep rising to the Challenge!