Monday, April 7, 2014

100 Word Challenge: Quinn

I swam and swam and swam until I was out of breath. I clung on to a piece of sharp wood.


        1 HOUR LATER

I see a tip of something sharp looking pop out of the water and go back down very quickly. Some sweat comes down my forehead. I swim away from it fast, but I thought I had enough time. I was so scared I didn’t feel the sharp teeth sink into my skin like needles. I soon feel it. And then I wake up, my heart racing like a horse. I go downstairs to get some cereal. I feel like the luckiest person ever.

1 comment:

  1. Manny,
    Descriptive! Is there a sequel?
    Miguel

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