Monday, April 28, 2014

100 Word Challenge: Shane

I go to the kitchen and when I opened the cupboard door a rat climbs out and jumps on me. I freak out and the lights turn on. "They heard me!" So I run the window and jump through the window, then someone tries to grab me but I'm to quick and run away. I start to see flashing lights and run faster and faster. I'm out of breath and hide behind a tree and sit there. Then before I fall asleep I start to hear footsteps so I stand up put my hands behind my head and give up and know its time for slammer for me.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Shane. Well done with your writing for this week's 100WC. I really like how you've built up the tension and speed within your writing. Great work, well done :-)
    Su Harris (Team 100WC Suffolk, UK)