Tuesday, April 29, 2014

100 Word Challenge: Quinn

"Lets play hide and seek", I said to Stephano. "I'll seek you hide". "Ready, Set, Go"!

            "1",
            "2",
            "3",
            "4",
        5 hours later...
             "1999",
             "2000"!
"Finally. Ready or not here I come!". I checked the fridge. No, to cold. I checked the basement. No, to obvious. Under the blanket on the couch? Nope it was flat. I checked the kitchen. Every single cabinet! Bu t then I heard a sound of a clicking. Probably paws. From a dog! "Stephano"!
    "I swear I checked every cabinet"! I took a break to eat a chicken sandwich. I was going to get a drink, and as I opened the cupboard door, Stephano was there!

2 comments:

  1. What an original response you've crafted for this week's prompt Quinn. I think the repetition of 'I checked' really serves to heighten the lengths a searcher needs to go to with a determined 'hider.' All topped off with a hint of humour.
    Well done and keep rising to the Challenge.

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  2. Hi Quinn this is Abby. So creative and very funny. I really liked your word choice. I also liked how you counted from 1 to 2000. Good job!

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